Lo$t ; I'm Left undone

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Lo$t ; I'm Left undone

Post  Rakesh-rock* on Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:27 am

My thoughts are rusty
Feelings are sobbed
Memories are black
And my soul is robbed

Lost in the maze
I come back to the same place
I seek a destination
I'm so lost in this Dark desert

I seem to be an addict
To tears and the truth
My days are sleepy
My nights are blurred

I try to fly
With broken wings
Hurt by the reality
Loved by my dreams

I need to fly
Need to be free
Don't need to cry
Need to rescue me...........
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Post  Aritry on Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:42 am

as I said b4...awsum one... Very Happy

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Post  [PayaL] on Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:29 am

awsume poem...loved the rhymes...lol...kinda sad...but nice bounce
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Post  Admin on Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:34 am

yay!!!! my poem is good!! Razz
thnx payalllll!!!!!! cheers

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Post  [PayaL] on Fri Jan 16, 2009 2:51 am

yayy!!! ur poem is good...ur welcomeZ rakesh Very Happy...keep rocxxin
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