Poem~MY AWAITED SOUL IS DEAD

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Poem~MY AWAITED SOUL IS DEAD

Post  Aritry on Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:12 pm

When I smile with u
May be I seem like a happy person;
But there's an another story behind this smile,
Underneath these cloths there's another girl lies...
Who has never been loved before,
Pain is whose best friend,
Have u ever seen this girl in me?
No you never, cause I never let u to.

I'm too alone to live a life,
But never approached anyone
To stand by my side.
Though I waited for
Many summers, many autumns,
But no one came by himself.
But I’m still waiting in the rain
Keep holding on to you.

Every night I cry alone,
Lying in my empty bed, in an empty room.
The moon light dies in my eyes...
But no one comes to see.
I don't wanna die in dreams,
Show me some hope!
A blue evening,
In my couch beside the fireplace
Music becomes my soul.

May be I’m born in wedlock,
May be other people know my identity,
But still I try to find myself - who am I?
Wellspring of pain is my life;
Life is a vain, I felt in my heart!
Whose gonna say its ok?
No one actually...
Look at my eyes, do I look like weak?
No I'm not,
Cause only those get weak who are still alive!
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Post  jalholic on Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:21 pm

ariii.....natun kithu post kor..waiting Very Happy

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Post  Aritry on Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:23 pm

Yup Sallu, i'll do it soon!!! Smile
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heyy

Post  Admin on Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:39 pm

Hope U r having nice time!!!!!!! What a Face

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Post  Admin on Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:39 pm

The Poem Is good also!!! Razz

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Post  Aritry on Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:42 pm

^^^Thanku thanku!! Laughing
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Post  Admin on Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:09 pm

ur welcum!!

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Post  sidish6 on Sat Jan 10, 2009 1:09 am

hey AD Wink
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Post  Aritry on Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:36 pm

^^^ahaa....No OFFTOPIC posts plz. u can only comment on the poem here!!! plz obey the rules. hav fun... Rolling Eyes

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Post  [PayaL] on Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:29 am

dear this poem is awsumeeeeeee...loved it
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Post  Aritry on Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:47 pm

^^Thank u Payu dear Smile

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Post  [PayaL] on Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:35 am

^^^ ur welcomeZ btw did u post this in jal forums ?
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Post  Aritry on Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:47 pm

^^^Yup i did...didint ya find it???? Shocked Exclamation

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Post  [PayaL] on Mon Jan 19, 2009 10:53 pm

^^^ i found it...b4 i didnt see it thats y i was asking..sowwie Razz
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Post  Aritry on Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:27 pm

awww...its okkies! Wink

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